Honestly, the first few chapters I read was very good the characters and the setting was good until it got the the villain and immediate doubting part, like dude? The duke suddenly became stupid, immediately trusting someone just cause they played with you since you were a KID!? are u an idiot? and add to the part where the unnecessary humiliation of walking down the street with naked was added like the Fuck? Out of all the characters its the MC that's most badly written, saying I hate wizards and shi cause they betrayed and became the he reason why his parents died. And How the fuck did he not become so cautious despite knowing that the warlock who cursed him is still alive? He's good but I hate the stupidity added to his character when in the first chapter we can clearly see that he's smart enough to have solve that problem and helped
Honestly, the first few chapters I read was very good the characters and the setting was good until it got the the villain and immediate doubting part, like dude? The duke suddenly became stupid, immediately trusting someone just cause they played with you since you were a KID!? are u an idiot? and add to the part where the unnecessary humiliation of walking down the street with naked was added like the Fuck? Out of all the characters its the MC that's most badly written, saying I hate wizards and shi cause they betrayed and became the he reason why his parents died. And How the fuck did he not become so cautious despite knowing that the warlock who cursed him is still alive? He's good but I hate the stupidity added to his character when in the first chapter we can clearly see that he's smart enough to have solve that problem and helped