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This is shit don't waste your time reading it guys, it's a mess and honestly what the fuck was that even all about
what's wrong? it's not even finished yet can you tell me why cuz im marinating ittt
Stupid mc and bitchy ml, i really hate it
Honestly, the first few chapters I read was very good the characters and the setting was good until it got the the villain and immediate doubting part, like dude? The duke suddenly became stupid, immediately trusting someone just cause they played with you since you were a KID!? are u an idiot? and add to the part where the unnecessary humiliation of walking down the street with naked was added like the Fuck? Out of all the characters its the MC that's most badly written, saying I hate wizards and shi cause they betrayed and became the he reason why his parents died. And How the fuck did he not become so cautious despite knowing that the warlock who cursed him is still alive? He's good but I hate the stupidity added to his character when in the first chapter we can clearly see that he's smart enough to have solve that problem and helped
Girl, I’m an aunty now. You can’t be talking about the mother of my nephew and niece this way. Is he flawed? Yes. But aren’t we all? (▰˘◡˘▰)
you know what, i agree. all of the chapters from the villain part to the end were so ass, i just finished reading and i'm irritated. i spent so much time scrolling to skip, the humiliation part was so weird and long, the author clearly had some kind of fetish they wanted to explore. It added nothing to the plot, same for the 1000 panels of tentacle rpe. I feel like the main characters were dumbed down for the vilain to have his moments of glory and porn at the end. Even narcis' character felt utterly useless
So true. The kids are so adorable it was all worth it.