This is actually a bit lacking for me. Don’t get me wrong. I like the story and all, but the seme and uke dating out of nowhere didn’t make sense at all. It’s like the author ran out of ideas on how to smooth it out or possibly because they lazily wrote this.
Yes, we want them see date. But in my defense, it did not justify the reason why the uke suddenly want to date the seme. Like, is the reason “i don’t want to lose him like this, so i’m gonna date him instead.” even enough?? then boom, their relationship is slowly blooming. For me, it’s not enough. There is something missing that the author could’ve done for, but even I can’t figure it out myself lol.
Anyway, this is just my take on this one. It also a minor concern (or maybe major, considering that I am talking about the development of their relationship.) Overall, I am enjoying the story, especially the uncensored smut scenes
This is actually a bit lacking for me. Don’t get me wrong. I like the story and all, but the seme and uke dating out of nowhere didn’t make sense at all. It’s like the author ran out of ideas on how to smooth it out or possibly because they lazily wrote this.
Yes, we want them see date. But in my defense, it did not justify the reason why the uke suddenly want to date the seme. Like, is the reason “i don’t want to lose him like this, so i’m gonna date him instead.” even enough?? then boom, their relationship is slowly blooming. For me, it’s not enough. There is something missing that the author could’ve done for, but even I can’t figure it out myself lol.
Anyway, this is just my take on this one. It also a minor concern (or maybe major, considering that I am talking about the development of their relationship.) Overall, I am enjoying the story, especially the uncensored smut scenes