Stop copying paragraphs from the novel and pasting it in a text box show don't tell, it ruins the flow when ur reading cuz all of a sudden there's a 3rd person narration, unless it's a personal thought of the character, SHOW the setting & action.
Stop copying paragraphs from the novel and pasting it in a text box show don't tell, it ruins the flow when ur reading cuz all of a sudden there's a 3rd person narration, unless it's a personal thought of the character, SHOW the setting & action.