it got worse from my last comment lol. here’s some of the things I didn’t like.
- there was little to no yearning. he showed up one day and that same day she decides to leave with him, as if he didn’t lie to her for months and plan on killing her.
- there’s no conclusion with the aunt or any real conflict after they get back together.
- she announces her pregnancy in a really awkward moment & way
- everything is rushed.theres no pregnancy scenes, a jump to the wedding, etc.
- it felt linear. & too cutesy. he went from being a guarded guy to babying her in the span of two seconds. the dialogue felt unrealistic.
- every chapter felt like a half chapter because it ends on unsatisfying “cliffhangers”.
it got worse from my last comment lol. here’s some of the things I didn’t like.
- there was little to no yearning. he showed up one day and that same day she decides to leave with him, as if he didn’t lie to her for months and plan on killing her.
- there’s no conclusion with the aunt or any real conflict after they get back together.
- she announces her pregnancy in a really awkward moment & way
- everything is rushed.theres no pregnancy scenes, a jump to the wedding, etc.
- it felt linear. & too cutesy. he went from being a guarded guy to babying her in the span of two seconds. the dialogue felt unrealistic.
- every chapter felt like a half chapter because it ends on unsatisfying “cliffhangers”.
overall I’d say 4/10. had momentum but fell off.