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Its pretty choppy, the artsyle compensates some but so far slow going. The plot moved quic...

scry October 6, 2026 12:10 pm

Its pretty choppy, the artsyle compensates some but so far slow going. The plot moved quickly so we don't really settle with the character, so far a spoiled brat with few prospects. I don't see how this can be a compelling read...?

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    scry October 6, 2026 12:15 pm

    Seems like the author wanted to get straight into this rapey fantasy, considering one woman on an island with a bunch of criminals. Like cmon.

    Sowa October 6, 2026 5:53 pm
    Seems like the author wanted to get straight into this rapey fantasy, considering one woman on an island with a bunch of criminals. Like cmon. scry

    What??? Is that in there..?