I'm sorry, but I have to say something/ask something. I've read 70 chapters so far and the story seems ALL OVER THE PLACE! Plots have been abandoned, random scenes pop up from chapter to chapter with no coherence, storyline and characters are left with holes. Nothing seems well-planned or thought through. It's like the author keeps remembering to go back or forth to add something and then continues from whatever they came up with that morning. Is there a plot even? I don't understand what are we ecpected to expect.. What is the goal here? Mind you, this is both my personal critique, but also a cry for someone to explain to me if I've misunderstood something or missed the storytelling technique. If it's meant to be just random chapters of the characters' lives then so be it..
I'm sorry, but I have to say something/ask something. I've read 70 chapters so far and the story seems ALL OVER THE PLACE! Plots have been abandoned, random scenes pop up from chapter to chapter with no coherence, storyline and characters are left with holes. Nothing seems well-planned or thought through. It's like the author keeps remembering to go back or forth to add something and then continues from whatever they came up with that morning. Is there a plot even? I don't understand what are we ecpected to expect.. What is the goal here?
Mind you, this is both my personal critique, but also a cry for someone to explain to me if I've misunderstood something or missed the storytelling technique.
If it's meant to be just random chapters of the characters' lives then so be it..