I like how I made a little joke for my comment but you put every frustration i genuinely have with this so perfectly. I wanted consensual so bad but I guess it is pretty consistent that women and bottoms are to be consumed; not have actual character arcs if sex of any kind is involved.
I agree lol it could have been hotter if she wasnt raped... Consent is HOT bruh
it's funny that you expected both plot and consent from a monsterfucker smut
╮(￣▽￣)╭To still have a proper plot is actually already fire
regarding consent, it's difficult to have consent while monster characters aren't even able to communicate properly.
you're probably should stay away from this kind of story unless stated that it's gonna be 100% consensual
This isn’t my expectation
My expectation is that it can be smut, nonconsensual, but not have a character basically be nothing besides enabling behavior
I don’t want to see a character crying and feeling like shit, hating on somebody that’s being forced upon them and feeling conflicted only for a chapter to even w panel later, they go “am I in love?” Like. Obviously this is a bit of a stretch but many do go this roundabout way
Like if you noticed, I complained about the lack of character development and the mc is only there to be preyed upon and then forgive that behavior, and go “oh my lord has sent me a divine message maybe..” like bro.
You can make someone conflicted, feel shame, want something, and be complex, not be two dimensional and be consistent in two things: lack a backbone and allow themselves to be put in a situation/get themselves into a situation and suddenly the story is “they live happily ever after” ??? If you don’t see the point, then idk what to tell you
I do want consensual, and I do want a lot of things that is so easy to get together, but I don’t mind a story lacking morals if it’s done right
You make a character with the only purpose of showing how bad the interest is and that they can’t do anything about it? Cool, make them interesting, not go heart eyed from getting SA’d because many certainly wouldn’t
Now if you say for example, this character loves noncon and experiences noncon from somebody, okay err, still iffy, but if they like it, that’s not on me to say besides criticizing the way it’s done since you have roleplay and consensual noncon as a thing, and if you want that fantasy, it can be done without all the “dark romance” shit label to excuse bad writing
waaait a minute but that's character development??
mc originally think it's a sin and she was so conflicted but she's too nice and realized that having sex with her gave relief to the monster who was in so much pain. so she changed her mind a bit. although that development is a bit too fast, but it is a development!
so that's probably why I dont understand what you expected....
Im having to turn off my brain and that’s not even working
This is making me mad because it’s based off of being pure and the whole religion antic and it’s irritating that she’s going around saying “I forgive you” as if she didn’t have her cooch torn 3 chapters (mind you, barely a week or so has passed through the 17 chapters unless her getting fucked in a bird’s nest, ew btw, was more than 3 days and nights) and it’s just like.. “???” Bro can we MAKE people in stories not go through this like the plot is interesting and it’s cool, and all of the above story building, but why the fuck is it always like the savior syndrome facing a crisis commonly SA (bitch why don’t we do something new) where the mc is experiencing traumatic and it’s straight up really fucking scary, and a bunch of it is like “wtf do I do” and suddenly it’s like it disappears like bro……. I feel so bad but it makes me MAD and ANGRY like GIVE THIS DIVA SOME CHARACTER FUUUUCKCKFKCKCKCK
How to write story plot world building 101 but then we have an mc with 0 personality and it revolves around forgiving and/or romantically involved with bitches who fuck their ass up literally and nonliteral
Will NEVER understand this, just give good hot steamy consensual sex if you can’t make a character not fall in love with their offender if at all (please just keep it out) before some character development and 5 stages of grief + 250 stages of reformation, don’t give me that “GUFHEHH.. I DONT WANT IT.. THEY’RE FORCING THEMSELVES ON ME!!! but lowkey it feels good though..” like bitch what shut up, and this shit doesn’t only apply to this manhwa alone, it’s the entirety of a bunch of smut we can commonly look around for
Like fuck I wanted lala freaky riding consenting monsterfucker, not nonconsensual beast with that weird “i dont want it” ahegao, motherfucker