The story concept is good, but it needed some more time in the oven. Specifically pacing, the story seemed to be going slowly but then bam! plot, soon bam! action!! smut! confrontation and rape?!
The twist of professor and mr.cane, greek, moon cult thing could have been explored more and the main character being weirdly headfirst but also timid to me felt a bit off. There's really no need to quickly end the story as the twist itself seemed to provide good amount to cover. Everything about this story felt like they are rushing to finish this quickly
The ML character itself seemed very interesting (except for that scene), the story could have showed his turmoil, his regrets, his thinking and everything about him having to bear the legacy of Greek's son and carrying his baggage and everything.
The story concept is good, but it needed some more time in the oven. Specifically pacing, the story seemed to be going slowly but then bam! plot, soon bam! action!! smut! confrontation and rape?!
The twist of professor and mr.cane, greek, moon cult thing could have been explored more and the main character being weirdly headfirst but also timid to me felt a bit off. There's really no need to quickly end the story as the twist itself seemed to provide good amount to cover. Everything about this story felt like they are rushing to finish this quickly
The ML character itself seemed very interesting (except for that scene), the story could have showed his turmoil, his regrets, his thinking and everything about him having to bear the legacy of Greek's son and carrying his baggage and everything.