It's fine if she crushes on Ray, but isn't it kinda early? I mean, sure she's more educated and her grandpa taught Ray, and all that. But it's only enough in my opinion to kind of see him as a brother. Just straight jumping to the romance is too much, at least add a friendship arc that's longer than just "Oohhh he saved me from bad kids and learned magic with grandpa." They didn't have much interaction during the arc where they took down Nile's old gang, and they still barely do in my opinion. Then again, these types of books like to make women helpless romantics so... (This is just my opinion don't attack me for it (constructive criticism is welcomed if u don't agree))
It's fine if she crushes on Ray, but isn't it kinda early? I mean, sure she's more educated and her grandpa taught Ray, and all that. But it's only enough in my opinion to kind of see him as a brother. Just straight jumping to the romance is too much, at least add a friendship arc that's longer than just "Oohhh he saved me from bad kids and learned magic with grandpa." They didn't have much interaction during the arc where they took down Nile's old gang, and they still barely do in my opinion. Then again, these types of books like to make women helpless romantics so... (This is just my opinion don't attack me for it (constructive criticism is welcomed if u don't agree))