Hey, just to let whoever made the story know next time you try to make a story and a good one at that don’t do this flashbacks bs. You could do a little itty-bitty flashback, but don’t take the story and take a whole chunk of it and make it a flashback. Why is 39 through 60 a flashback for the main character and then right after chapter 60 we get one little scene in the present and we jump right back to a flashback in the perspective of the other main character the whole same exact scenes we just saw, but his perspective like it didn’t have to be that long. I should not still be reading a flashback on episode 70 lock in.
Hey, just to let whoever made the story know next time you try to make a story and a good one at that don’t do this flashbacks bs. You could do a little itty-bitty flashback, but don’t take the story and take a whole chunk of it and make it a flashback. Why is 39 through 60 a flashback for the main character and then right after chapter 60 we get one little scene in the present and we jump right back to a flashback in the perspective of the other main character the whole same exact scenes we just saw, but his perspective like it didn’t have to be that long. I should not still be reading a flashback on episode 70 lock in.