Story is solid good but not written well for me. It feels jumpy, not tied together properly and it's direction just flows all over in a way that doesn't work for me. Characters are likeable, story has a lot to say but it isn't conveyed well and it doesn't go into depth enough and wrap good for me. Felt like this had huge potential but came off chaotic a bit. overall it's ok
Story is solid good but not written well for me. It feels jumpy, not tied together properly and it's direction just flows all over in a way that doesn't work for me. Characters are likeable, story has a lot to say but it isn't conveyed well and it doesn't go into depth enough and wrap good for me. Felt like this had huge potential but came off chaotic a bit. overall it's ok