No wonder this has a very vague plot. This seems to be inspired a bit by chinese period court dramas & palace intrigue. But I didnt understand why I was seeing traditionally japanese style bits here & there, with names like Kaya & the maids name, which arent traditionally chinese or like anything from the surrounding ethnic groups, & why the costumes looked odd & certain bits were all over era-wise. The person who made this must be foreign since this is a patreon comic. The art style has so much promise, since the characters are already rather well drawn. The story has a little bit of a pacing issue & the plot seems like it may either get rushed or drag out too long especially. W the dialogue, but there is definitely a lot to look forward to based on what I've read. It definitely feels lien a first try, but not in a bad way, just in that it could use some polish. I'm going to let it marinate a bit & see how it goes
No wonder this has a very vague plot. This seems to be inspired a bit by chinese period court dramas & palace intrigue. But I didnt understand why I was seeing traditionally japanese style bits here & there, with names like Kaya & the maids name, which arent traditionally chinese or like anything from the surrounding ethnic groups, & why the costumes looked odd & certain bits were all over era-wise. The person who made this must be foreign since this is a patreon comic. The art style has so much promise, since the characters are already rather well drawn. The story has a little bit of a pacing issue & the plot seems like it may either get rushed or drag out too long especially. W the dialogue, but there is definitely a lot to look forward to based on what I've read. It definitely feels lien a first try, but not in a bad way, just in that it could use some polish. I'm going to let it marinate a bit & see how it goes