beta
Story is pretty badly written & thought out... art is okay, but bodies are drawn a little naively & apparently without reference in some regard...???? Based on his light sabers shape, I really dread whats under there... what is with that shape... and how quickly they just fuck.. idk, the vibe is liek a ff written by a 14yo? Maybe my first smut w plot attempt on ff.net was similar
Its a little, idk, anticlimactic or boring or maybe just slow? But the FMC is gorgeous without being too much, the smut is good even if the designs are a little too similar for the main monsters in some ways. I'm vibing w the snake. Tired of the "masks"(for lack of a better word) somehow, even the rape is low stakes, which is insane for a monster fucking comic...