Story is pretty badly written & thought out... art is okay, but bodies are drawn a little naively & apparently without reference in some regard...???? Based on his light sabers shape, I really dread whats under there... what is with that shape... and how quickly they just fuck.. idk, the vibe is liek a ff written by a 14yo? Maybe my first smut w plot attempt on ff.net was similar
Story is pretty badly written & thought out... art is okay, but bodies are drawn a little naively & apparently without reference in some regard...???? Based on his light sabers shape, I really dread whats under there... what is with that shape... and how quickly they just fuck.. idk, the vibe is liek a ff written by a 14yo? Maybe my first smut w plot attempt on ff.net was similar