Story is pretty badly written & thought out... art is okay, but bodies are drawn a little naively & apparently without reference in some regard...???? Based on his light sabers shape, I really dread whats under there... what is with that shape... and how quickly they just fuck.. idk, the vibe is liek a ff written by a 14yo? Maybe my first smut w plot attempt on ff.net was similar
A big build with a neck that matches the body, but small head/face beauty standards have again made the proportions look so odd... damn it!
No wonder this has a very vague plot. This seems to be inspired a bit by chinese period court dramas & palace intrigue. But I didnt understand why I was seeing traditionally japanese style bits here & there, with names like Kaya & the maids name, which arent traditionally chinese or like anything from the surrounding ethnic groups, & why the costumes looked odd & certain bits were all over era-wise. The person who made this must be foreign since this is a patreon comic. The art style has so much promise, since the characters are already rather well drawn. The story has a little bit of a pacing issue & the plot seems like it may either get rushed or drag out too long especially. W the dialogue, but there is definitely a lot to look forward to based on what I've read. It definitely feels lien a first try, but not in a bad way, just in that it could use some polish. I'm going to let it marinate a bit & see how it goes
The author is from the Philippines and is using East Asian inspiration so she's mixing everything in...
That explains it. Spains influence on names. I know all to well as a Chicano that influence
We all agree.. Rosa's not very likeable right? I'm a sadist & am into bdsm irl, & i like to be mean to men in that way as well, so that doesnt bother me, but just overall, Rosa doesnt have much of a personality, beyond not seeming to have empathy & being something of a Psychopath... she's sort of boring & uninteresting, which makes me sad.... she sure can fuck though tg, her choice in slightly unwilling submissive men is 10/10
I disagree with the "unwilling" because that's the worst part lol ,I would have rather he slowly got seduced than forced .
Other than that I agree with everything, she seems like the type who is following the exact ideal standards of a Korean woman ,even drawn like a doll in some panels ,chaebol ,popular .
Yet beyond the fact that she is malicious and sadistic after desiring a guy she felt she couldn't have ,she seems genuinely not to have anything going for her as a character ,she barely does anything to influence her environment despite being wealthy ,it seems like it's more of a forbidden romance fetish (and bdsm though the lack of consent was eww at first ) than a genuine character and plot exploration (even though others characters are more fleshed out than Rosa).
I feel like Hyobin always wanted to write a femdom story but never thought too much about how it would be or how genuine BDSM is ,so the story is unfolding this way
I see your point, I suppose I say this because I feel like his end goal is v obv Rosa, he was def rxped by her more than once, & the first time he was drugged... her other boy toy is maybe barely getting into being the sub top lol
Seems, maybe a little boring, but the guys are hit & the girls are very cute so... we shall see
I' having a hard time picking my fave couple... simply because sub top purple hair tentacles dude has swept me off my proverbial feet... yes, yes ... cry more as you get ridden to death...
I'm so looking forward to seeing the third pairing
Yessss, these authors knows ball so it will be great no matter what
Porn with an original plot? Rare. Pussy that turns actual monster into men? Astounding. 10/10 art. Actually beautifully drawn & colored, with the men as hot as the women. So good. Now if it just had more monster dick designs... fingers crossed
you get me
I saw on authors twitter that there will be more monsters but blue guy is the main ML
I'm glad to know! I personally prefer one male lead, but, since theyre monsters & drawn so well... I look forward to it!
Tiniest heads, extremely thin neck, biggest eyes & breasts possible, long bodies that make the head look smaller... men have small heads too but necks that match. The style is almost cute if their heads weren't so small that you question their lower jaw & where all that hair was sitting...
Its a little, idk, anticlimactic or boring or maybe just slow? But the FMC is gorgeous without being too much, the smut is good even if the designs are a little too similar for the main monsters in some ways. I'm vibing w the snake. Tired of the "masks"(for lack of a better word) somehow, even the rape is low stakes, which is insane for a monster fucking comic...