Came back to read cause I thought the premise was interesting. I agree with the comments and it turns into one of those misunderstanding troupes.
Biggest feedback is the main lead is extremely toxic in her wishy washy state and very bad with communication skills. She is quick to insult and creates all the misunderstandings.
The dude becomes for a little bit became turned on by this toxic trait. He’s obsessed with the FML and simple minded. I wasn’t a fan of him forcing himself on her when he got frustrated (kissing wise) but he’s a rich family guy so he acts just like that.
Things sorta settle out once they start dating but she’s an extremely frustrated FML who has an inferiority complex till that point in the story which is a longggggg point
Came back to read cause I thought the premise was interesting. I agree with the comments and it turns into one of those misunderstanding troupes.
Biggest feedback is the main lead is extremely toxic in her wishy washy state and very bad with communication skills. She is quick to insult and creates all the misunderstandings.
The dude becomes for a little bit became turned on by this toxic trait. He’s obsessed with the FML and simple minded. I wasn’t a fan of him forcing himself on her when he got frustrated (kissing wise) but he’s a rich family guy so he acts just like that.
Things sorta settle out once they start dating but she’s an extremely frustrated FML who has an inferiority complex till that point in the story which is a longggggg point