Odd choice to have them go camping, a ghost pops up, we take a break for a several-chapter flashback, and then we go back to the camp sight, they get rid of the ghost immediately, and then we take a time jump a YEAR later? Wild pacing--and what happened to MC's coworker?
Odd choice to have them go camping, a ghost pops up, we take a break for a several-chapter flashback, and then we go back to the camp sight, they get rid of the ghost immediately, and then we take a time jump a YEAR later? Wild pacing--and what happened to MC's coworker?