I don’t think anyone should necessarily stop themselves from reading this just based off the reviews as it’s not a bad story by any means, however, I wouldn’t necessarily call it good. It falls in the middle. The story fails to make you attached to either character, and while it attempts to explain the characters backstories, it fails to make you truly care in a sense. This ends up backfiring plot wise as well as by the end of the story when the two get together, it doesn’t necessarily feel earned at all. If you’re focused purely on the smut, as it seems this story is mainly focused on that, it’s good. But if you’re looking for a short story with good plot and depth, then it’s disappointingly lackluster with so much potential that the author just couldn’t grasp on to correctly. Again, I’m not hating on it or calling it a bad story by any means, as I’ve read enough slop to know what constitutes as such lol, I just really wish the author had capitalized on the potential the story laid down and that the character dynamics. I can’t truthfully say I enjoyed it, because in all honesty, I sadly felt indifferent towards it.
I don’t think anyone should necessarily stop themselves from reading this just based off the reviews as it’s not a bad story by any means, however, I wouldn’t necessarily call it good. It falls in the middle.
The story fails to make you attached to either character, and while it attempts to explain the characters backstories, it fails to make you truly care in a sense. This ends up backfiring plot wise as well as by the end of the story when the two get together, it doesn’t necessarily feel earned at all.
If you’re focused purely on the smut, as it seems this story is mainly focused on that, it’s good. But if you’re looking for a short story with good plot and depth, then it’s disappointingly lackluster with so much potential that the author just couldn’t grasp on to correctly.
Again, I’m not hating on it or calling it a bad story by any means, as I’ve read enough slop to know what constitutes as such lol, I just really wish the author had capitalized on the potential the story laid down and that the character dynamics. I can’t truthfully say I enjoyed it, because in all honesty, I sadly felt indifferent towards it.