The story has a pacing issue, we move from one event to the other way to quickly. To the point where it seems like they sacrifice getting to know each character/character development . Spoilers ahead!
Like the baseball guy (don’t know his name which is a tell) and the girl with the bow and arrow are engaged? Why did it take so long to know this? Also, we don’t even know how they got engaged, and how the rest of the group even met? Like I’m in chapter 56 and I have no idea who the characters are, what are they’re motivations, they’re likes and dislike. I know next to nothing about the main character, like why is such a shut-in the first place, who was he before the apocalypse and who even is he now. He spent chapter after chapter harping on about how important his family is, and yet we don’t see him spend time with them. How am I supposed to care for the main character or any of the people he cares about if I’m not given time to get to know them and care for them.
Like in chapter 56 he declares that he cares about the hunting group, but they never interact outside of him giving them missions. We don’t get scenes of them having heart to hearts or bonding, so it makes no sense why he’s grown so emotionally attached to them. Because I thought he only cared about how useful he was to him, I mean with the way he keeps on sending them on back to back missions, with only a nights rest .
Maybe this one of those cases where the novel is better than the manhwa
The story has a pacing issue, we move from one event to the other way to quickly. To the point where it seems like they sacrifice getting to know each character/character development .
Spoilers ahead!
Like the baseball guy (don’t know his name which is a tell) and the girl with the bow and arrow are engaged? Why did it take so long to know this? Also, we don’t even know how they got engaged, and how the rest of the group even met? Like I’m in chapter 56 and I have no idea who the characters are, what are they’re motivations, they’re likes and dislike.
I know next to nothing about the main character, like why is such a shut-in the first place, who was he before the apocalypse and who even is he now. He spent chapter after chapter harping on about how important his family is, and yet we don’t see him spend time with them. How am I supposed to care for the main character or any of the people he cares about if I’m not given time to get to know them and care for them.
Like in chapter 56 he declares that he cares about the hunting group, but they never interact outside of him giving them missions. We don’t get scenes of them having heart to hearts or bonding, so it makes no sense why he’s grown so emotionally attached to them. Because I thought he only cared about how useful he was to him, I mean with the way he keeps on sending them on back to back missions, with only a nights rest .
Maybe this one of those cases where the novel is better than the manhwa