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Pretty art, terrible story telling. Every panel is a close-up on someone's face for some r...

probablyintraffic October 10, 2017 8:48 am

Pretty art, terrible story telling. Every panel is a close-up on someone's face for some reason and there's no establishing their prior friendship OR the decision to break off the yearly thing by lying. It's clear what everyone's thinking but it's still hard to tell how they feel because there's zero hints of their inner life.

Like, I'm OK with yaoi that has melodramatic contrived rapey plots but this is just doing nothing to me

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