the second translation is so much better! crazy how much the translation alters the story....

Exactly, ifwe consider the first translation it was like Shirotani said that Kurose wanted someone else, after something like that there is no way they could continue making love like nothing happened

I know, right. So strange. I even felt like "oh no, I don't like Ten Count anymore" with the first translation but was all hyped and in love with the second one.

Same!