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I love it so much. I never thought a story can be so good with only 44 pages. But this On...

FirestarShadow December 22, 2017 12:22 pm

I love it so much. I never thought a story can be so good with only 44 pages. But this One Shot is better that most of the longer series. I want to read more!

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    CrystalAris January 17, 2018 11:00 pm

    Same ^^ ...but at the same time if it was longer... it would start fallowing regular clichés and become dull in the late half of it. there was only one oneshot that didn't turn into a sh*t hole (though it did start fallowing the rival flow.... still it kept some of its uniqueness.

    Capuccino January 19, 2018 7:17 pm
    Same ^^ ...but at the same time if it was longer... it would start fallowing regular clichés and become dull in the late half of it. there was only one oneshot that didn't turn into a sh*t hole (though it did ... CrystalAris

    (Hey! I came :) and yeah it was fun! And not clichéd)