Thank you ╮(￣▽￣)╭
You're welcome!
After reading it, I have to say, having it in chronological order makes it so much better (maybe it can be posted in the chapter list?). For those who aren't getting on with the manga with it's current, jumbled time line... give Kokeshi's version a go, as it means the story works better at showing the gradual build up of Anjou and Mine's relationship, and how this affects others.
This makes so much sense now!!
I kinda like the disorganized one but could get anything, it was nice and poetical I guess but hard to get.
Thank you so much for doing this!!!
I like the disorganized feeling, too, and the random spot-lights on situations that occur daily. Sensei created a great story, she captured the difficulty/essence/effing confusion of meeting someone randomly, and then falling in love with them. I still love the original version...but I'm super happy that you enjoyed the revamp as much as I did, thanks.
Yes! Exactly. And I like it even better now I get the order of events. It feels real, like real life, being disorganized and emphasis on daily life events.
Thanks for taking some time to do it. It really worth it!
https://imgur.com/a/qSfTDnn
It was def worth putting the stories in order. June 9th has two alternate versions, you can tell by the clocks that the events couldn't happen on the same day.
Let me know if the link doesn't work. Enjoy!