Chapter one is okay but chapter 2 is too meh. The story is bland. I know that most yaoi follow that "let's meet, suddenly fall in love and have sex" pattern but they'd compensate with something, it can be great erotic scenes or some angsty struggles with hiding feelings...anything to make the story more palatable but this is too ordinary and unromantic. Both seme and uke have no depth to their characters
Chapter one is okay but chapter 2 is too meh. The story is bland. I know that most yaoi follow that "let's meet, suddenly fall in love and have sex" pattern but they'd compensate with something, it can be great erotic scenes or some angsty struggles with hiding feelings...anything to make the story more palatable but this is too ordinary and unromantic. Both seme and uke have no depth to their characters