yuhh yuh. The story just felt so empty and bland :'( as if it were missing something but I can't quite pin-point it
I'll point it out for you ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
It doesn't feel like love and the uke .. I just don't know what's going through his mind ╮(￣▽￣)╭ so what do you think?
MYGODDD I CAN SEE IT NOW :'D Like, it just felt like pity-sex and purely-sex-and-lust-no-love. And yes I agree, the seme and the uke don't exactly express their "love" clearly so I just feel like there wasn't even any love in the first place- no psychological dynamic in their relationship whatsoever. In my eyes the whole story is literally equivalent to 2 lifeless dolls having sex with each other.
Yaoi is supposed to give me a tingling sensation in my stomach and make my heart beat at the romantic aspect of it- n this fuckery dint do shitt except make me limp D''':
A~~~~nd Voila ╮(￣▽￣)╭ that's exactly it !!
I thought there'll be something interesting about the seme but it was disappointing ╥﹏╥ because I really like characters like him (︶︿︶)＝凸
In the beginning I had my doubts for the first seme. But I think at the end he helped a person by breaking his cycle of having relationships who only saw him as casual sex (and one-sided at that). He actually cared about him but he is not a lovey-dovey character. He is harsh and rude and tough but that's why he managed to help the uke and become his partner.
Spot on. They seem to be more in mutual tolerance than love. But then again for people like me who can’t really tolerate anyone...it takes love, lol.
I think they love each other. But especially the seme let's say is a peculiar character (rough and edgy). You can have a rather bad character bbut still love someone. But as you say your partner have to tolerate you if he loves you back and wants to stay with you.
I would've given it 5 stars if it wasn't for the first story ╮(￣▽￣)╭ I didn't like it very much it was ok