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I agree. Not that it was was all over over the place but that it simply wasn't very good. It was a decent manga but not something I'd rate high. Gave it 3 stars for mainly the reasons you gave
i think its also because is one of her first works, so its not as complex and well developped as the rest of it. U can kinda see it by the art alone that this is rather early in her career.
I genuinely like Yamamoto sensei's work but something 'bout this manga really irritated me not because it's incest but...everything seemed all over the place? Okay now hear me out before you start hating on me - it seemed kinda off, the way their feelings came outta nowhere. Like -
I dunno from where the big brother (Chris) suddenly started having romantic feelings toward his step brother? Or "not hating" one or two kisses from him? Or acting really weird (the gay weird xD) toward him while being drunk? I mean he was almost 'bout to marry off his step brother with another girl (a dude basically but Chris didn’t know yet) because of the "pregnant" prank.
Then again, the step brother's case was weirder. He just kissed Chris outta nowhere. He never showed any sort of romantic feelings or the slighest bit of jealousy before when Chris was getting love letters or that big judo dude being in love with Chris. Instead, he actually helped the judo guy out to be closer with Chris.
Before starting reading this manga, I surely knew it's a brotherxbrother genre but seeing the step brother's responses, it almost made me confused for a while if I got it all wrong and they aren't supposed to be a thing lmao.
Not much character development neither the major characters were much likeable.