All the story concept was great, if only the author would make the story longer, not too rushed and make the story more developed. it seem like there's unnecessary dialogue and conflict, or there's some good conflict, that can make the story more great and had more feely, but the author decided to end the conflict too fast and kinda makes it pointless. The story kinda leave me hanging.. The art's good though, if only the author can make a good plot, and dialogue.
All the story concept was great, if only the author would make the story longer, not too rushed and make the story more developed. it seem like there's unnecessary dialogue and conflict, or there's some good conflict, that can make the story more great and had more feely, but the author decided to end the conflict too fast and kinda makes it pointless. The story kinda leave me hanging..
The art's good though, if only the author can make a good plot, and dialogue.