The quality of the drawings is so inconsistent, only the boss and the second seme are attr...

I believe you must be Da Vinci right? since you're calling someone else's art ugly.

And don't start with the "I'm stating what is evident" bs.
Like, how would an author feel?

Damn some of you out there behave like you can judge and just be rude as fuck.

You could've kept the statements you made to yourself ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

It’s called criticism. This one was a little crude, but not invalid. And to criticise art you just need working eyes

The art is one thing, but the plot and characters are annoying. The main guy lacks so much confidence so how does he have people obsessing and falling for him? I don't see how great his appeal is for one to become obsessive and another to have a one sided crush on the side.

You could’ve kept your comments to yourself as well, but I see you chose not to.

Whether or not I’m an artist (I am) has nothing to do with the ability to critique something. I know what consistency looks like. I know when something is disproportionate. I know the qualities that makes a human attractive to other humans. So do you. So do most people. I’m not saying this artist should be as good as the artist who does Painter of the Night, I’m saying that

1. The two main characters are inconsistently and often poorly drawn, while secondary characters are more aesthetically pleasing. This makes it feel as if the main characters are throwaway. The story makes both the seme and uke highly unlikeable, without the benefit of being drawn prettily to balance it out.

2. The main uke and main seme are drawn inconsistently. The artist needs more practice drawing their own characters in the most common positions.

3. If a different artist is drawing different characters, then the artists need to switch. Of all the characters, the protagonist and primarily love interest should be the best drawn, and their story should be the clearest and most empathetic.

Ideally the author would have the insight to agree with my criticisms and then work on fixing these specific problems so their comic is elevated. But if they’re immature and believe they’re just fine as-is, then they’ll likely cry about someone saying that their big-headed uke has a big head or that their ugly seme is WAY too ugly to have an ugly personality as well.

I stand by everything I said. And by the way? There’s a reason folks who can’t sing two notes in the same key end up humiliated on talent shows, namely folks who think it’s better to be “nice” than to be forthright and truthful. One of the artists working on this (maybe there is only one) clearly has the capacity for excellence which means these inconsistencies are the result of someone slacking and not caring as much as they should.

I'm sorry ┗( T﹏T )┛

I guess I came forceful too. I just wanted for people to stop.always bashing others. You know, I feel that for every project there is at least one person who cherishes it. I don't want other to discredit their even if little efforts.

I wasn't praising nor story nor plot.

So please don't hold any hard feelings on me. I'm really sorry.

If you're an artist can I see your art? I like art a lot. Maybe you have an Instagram @ or something ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~