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This could have been better

Amita4ever July 23, 2020 9:56 am

I really wanted to like this story a lot more than I did. It was illustrated by one of my favorite artists and had believable characters dealing with believable issues (if a bit exaggerated), but the translation/text was so stilted, jerky, and plagued with omitted words and pronouns that it was hard to really sink into the story and get emotionally involved.

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