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Also, I have read A LOT of manga on this site and others, and this is by far not the worst in terms of writing. However I'm how far in and don't care about any of the characters and I already have a good idea how this going to end. Which is somewhat frustrating and disappointing. And now I'm slightly bored.

Does anyone else feel like this story is being written by a teen? Or at least someone who has very little experience in writing. Like I'm not a big fan of the art but I don't think great art is necessary, however the writing needs to be good and this, well it just isnt. Almost like it's a fanfic or smth