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Really cliche and bad writing

Idekmann September 14, 2020 10:23 am

Does anyone else feel like this story is being written by a teen? Or at least someone who has very little experience in writing. Like I'm not a big fan of the art but I don't think great art is necessary, however the writing needs to be good and this, well it just isnt. Almost like it's a fanfic or smth

Responses
    Hayella-chan September 14, 2020 10:54 am

    if you hate it why bother to read it (●'◡'●)ノ

    Angela-chan September 14, 2020 11:05 am

    I think It's great go and write one yourself if ur that good at It hun.

    Chimmy4405 September 14, 2020 11:48 am

    Then go write and draw your own

    Idekmann September 15, 2020 7:32 am

    Well first, I never said I hated it. Second, I have written and drawn a comic before, not that it makes a difference - I don't need to be a chef to know when the food tastes like shit.

    Idekmann September 15, 2020 7:39 am

    Also, I have read A LOT of manga on this site and others, and this is by far not the worst in terms of writing. However I'm how far in and don't care about any of the characters and I already have a good idea how this going to end. Which is somewhat frustrating and disappointing. And now I'm slightly bored.

    Hayella-chan September 15, 2020 8:40 am

    taraay mo dami mong alam hate is the right term from what you said bleeeeeh(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Idekmann September 15, 2020 2:22 pm

    Mate, I just said it seemed like a fanfic. I read fanfics