So, for the first story, the seme was realllllyy cute! But the romance of their story was lacking. In the end, I didn't really feel like the uke finally fell in love with seme. I mean, I guess allowing him to go so far as grope his body showed he had feeling for the uke, but it didn't even get close to the emotions being given by the seme. Maybe, he was still confusing his affection and fondness for the seme with what he thinks is love?
On the second story, I also don't like characters that likes to play with other people's emotions just because they feel superior over them. But!!!! Yes, there is a but here! He did have redeeming qualities. He did have a good character development. When he was told directly about his bad behavior, he immediately tries to correct it. He also became sensitive to the emotional needs of his partner. And tho, he didn't get it at first, once he realized what he lacked, he did something about it. Which, to be honest, is one of those things that is completely ignored in other stories.
So, for the first story, the seme was realllllyy cute! But the romance of their story was lacking. In the end, I didn't really feel like the uke finally fell in love with seme. I mean, I guess allowing him to go so far as grope his body showed he had feeling for the uke, but it didn't even get close to the emotions being given by the seme. Maybe, he was still confusing his affection and fondness for the seme with what he thinks is love?
On the second story, I also don't like characters that likes to play with other people's emotions just because they feel superior over them. But!!!! Yes, there is a but here! He did have redeeming qualities. He did have a good character development. When he was told directly about his bad behavior, he immediately tries to correct it. He also became sensitive to the emotional needs of his partner. And tho, he didn't get it at first, once he realized what he lacked, he did something about it. Which, to be honest, is one of those things that is completely ignored in other stories.