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story was all over the place. I was hoping for some redeeming quality from the seme. but he was still just a manipulative jerk from start to finish. Even his friends were jerks. The way they treated him in the earlier chapters was not really explained well. All I got from this story was that uke was such a naive clueless idiot but cute and that the seme has been obsessed with him ever since.
i mean, aside from the first story about the first couple's college days, everything was good.
I just can't get over the first story. I know they worked it out in the end and this has way better communication than half of BL stories that I've read but I just can't get over that one panel.
Imagine trying to be intimate with your lover. You're both in a vulnerable state. And then somebody calls, and he decides to stop it in the middle and prioritise the call instead? If it was me, that would have made me feel the most awful and questioning my worth. I'd have appreciated the story more without that particular scene. Or they could have talked about it more? Like if the uke was not particularly up to it, then he should've said so. And not end it with a sex scene where it feels like the uke is just accepting it because he feels bad for the seme. It would have been better if the dialogue could have been more where the uke was telling the seme that he actually missed him during those days the seme was.not around and can't wait for tomorrow or something.