….even tho I don’t love 95+% of her smut, but jfc it’s starting to be annoying. Like I’m on chapter 10 and the plot w the person sabotaging girl is taking forver and chick keeps misunderstanding whether dude likes her. Like he said he likes you, jfc. Anyways I quit.
1: I fcking hate the ML’s hair, that’s some straight douche hair. Like the hair of a mentally challenged Wall Street btch. . #2: nothing draws me in. Like I’m not above reading trashy sht, I’m something of a connoisseur of trash, but it’s got to be entertaining trash and I’ve got to like the mc. I don’t hate her, I just have no interest in her. In the beginning sure she felt sympathetic, but this arc whrrr dude is trying to get a contract to bang her is just so fcking painful for me. Like have some pride btch, make that dumbcunt work for that pussy. God it makes me want to smack both of them. I want to smack some sense into the fl and push the ml off a cliff onto sharp rocks where he lies for days, broken and in agony before he dies. I love a story with a trash ml (or seme) who redeems himself (esp if there’s a cathartic face slap moment), so I’m easy, but dude is just so fcking smug with that stupid fcking hair.
….or if they have had sex, it’s shtty sex with an uptight partner. But then there’s manga like this where I’m like this person has had some raunchy sex. I guess it’s possible they have a great imagination and studied a lot. But The expression your partner gets when they’re super turned on, that’s hard to fake. I’m very picky when it comes to smut, most of it bores me. Like literally nothing turns me on anymore. I think if my body wasn’t dead I’d def find this one hot.
…. I don’t think this is the dictatorship ripoff ppl are making it out to be. I literally looked it up to go read it & while there are similarities, it’s definitely different. Like all the similarities feel very surface level. Like the hair color is the same and the FL is Asian and dark haired (which most of these stories feature an Asian FL). They’re both bodyguards and the ml is rich. I could see this being inspired by dictatorship but I’m not seeing rip off. Remember all art is derivative and dictatorship isn’t some ground breaking new story either. It’s been done. Like at this point there is no story, art or music that’s wildly different than anything that’s already been made. There’s only so many ways notes or words can be arranged that we’ll enjoy. There’s no new colors or way of putting paint on canvas that hasn’t been done. Every author and artist was inspired someone. All that being said so far I’m liking dictatorship more. Again I’m only 22 chapters into Dark storm but the motivations of the fl in dictatorship make a lot more sense to me. Like dark storm’s fl has some of the same sht that mildly irritates me about other fl’s in other het romance I’ve read. But we’ll see, I only read to chapter 43 of dictatorship last night before bed, and I quit dark storm after 22 chapters to wait for more before continuing. But I’m glad I found these yesterday bc I needed something to read. I’ve been taking in a lot of horrific sht trying to stay informed & desperately needed a break from literal atrocities and war crimes. So I appreciate everyone comparing this to dictatorship bc it gave me something to read that I’m actually enjoying.
both dark storm and dictatorship have the same author (of the novels) - Kim Shinhyung and illustrated by the same artist, so its more like the author really like that specifically plot and so done it twice lmao
….low key I’m kind of bored. The mc’s are flat & the story kinda annoying. Is it worth keeping at it? Like does it get better? Or do the characters stop being so incredibly one dimensional? Appreciate the heads up.
Same in the beginning it was interesting buts it's getting so waterdown and now I'm starting to get irritated with the FL *sigh*
Srsly the stories so forgettable that I couldn’t even remember what story we're talking about. I literally had to go back to the webtoon and remind myself. It sucks bc I live for a redheaded MC. I love red hair so much that I spent 11 yrs dying my hair all sorts of red shades. I literally manifested a redheaded baby. Me & her dad both are brunettes but I gave birth to a redheaded baby. So few MC’s have red hair, then I find one but I’m bored by the story.
Wow are you in my head lol I love red haired MCs!
Even when they aren't the mc they always end up my fav in every story.
Have you read The Villain Discovered My Identity. It's good with a strong red haired FL. I recommend it
Red or dark haired mc’s are my fav. Yes I’m actually in the middle of villain discovered my identity. I paused so more chapters could build up bc I like reading all or most of a story instead of chapter by chapter. But yeah it’s good. I was a bit turned off by the art at first but got used to it. I’m a huge fan of a powerful or talented mc. Like I’m allergic to 95% of the mary sue or Gary sue mc’s. Every once in awhile I find one that doesn’t make me want to hang myself, but usually I end up hating them.
I can tolerate a lot with yaoi but the mc is 1: a child, 2: the ml is his employer, the director of his school, and has a fiancé. Add that after his finance treated his maid like sht, he didn’t immediately dump her. Dude is supposed the adore the kid but doesn’t dump the fcking btch asap after she shows her ass. Like he doesn’t even like her so why hold on? But mainly I can’t get over the mc being a child.
He cheated but yet we were supposed to like him???
He already dumped the fiancé right? But i agree in modern times this will be grooming and paedophilic (〜￣△￣)〜
I don’t think they’re officially broken up at this point. Also it’s not like this was written in 1992. It’s not just Yaoi, it’s a Japanese obsession with HS students. Like 28 is considered old. I’m not gonna say this shouldn’t be written or anyone is trash for enjoying this, but I’ll admit this kind of thing grosses me out. It’s even slightly hypocritical of me considering I was fcking with dudes in their 20’s when I was 14, but I also now get how fcked up those dudes were. I also know I’d have loved these storylines when I was a teenager bc I thought older guys were cool and mysterious instead of the truth, that they were fcking trash.
She’s supposed to be this bad ass powerful knight bc she’s like 5”2 with a thigh gap & no scars. Also where’s the bulging muscles from swinging a heavy ass sword around. Like she shouldn’t be able to pick that sht up let alone decapitate a huge ass motherfucker. Like I can suspend my reality for magic and monsters but not a tiny girl being op with no magical explanation to why she’s so strong.
Nooo for real I can’t take her serious with the toothpick skinny arms,legs and tiny waist with the big tits and ass, throwing her huge sword around while everyone stops to look at her in awe and talk about how unbelievable ruthless and strong she is
like what kind of toxic feminism, unrealistic beauty standards is this shit (jk)
Ikr!! At least give it some magical explanation. Like she’s got some relic or charm that makes her strong. Or she’s descended from some race of tiny gods who look weak but are op.
I really should finish the novel. I just got stuck bc there’s a ridiculous amount of sht that gets between them actually being together.
When it comes to 5-6 chapter manga I usually wait for them to be compete before I read, but this summery sounds super familiar; and not in the this is a trope I recognize. I swear I’ve read this before. Anyone else think this might be a reupload? I’ve seen a few mangas that were translated years ago licensed and released on sites like renta, only to end up here with a different title.
I also think it's a reupload, I swear I've seen this title on this site.
The summery sounds exactly like something I’ve read. I could just read it and find out but if I haven’t read it yet, I don’t want to start at 3 chapters. I read so much I get lost when a new chapter comes out and have to start back at chapter one. But when it comes to these 5-6 chapter mangas that lack any real depth or emotion, I get bored. But yeah I think it’s prob uploaded here under it’s Japanese title but the English title is translated on the title page by the scan group. I appreciate the validation of my theory tho
….as soon as dude said “you’ll come faster then a girl”?! Like is the author a dude? Bc only dudes are dumb enough to think sht like that. I mean aren’t we low key notorious for being hard to make come during sex? Like I literally didn’t have an orgasam during penetrative sex till after I popped out a child; and I credit the post partum hormones for making it happen. Also most straight guys suck at knowing how to do it in a way that makes you come, and it’s a lot harder to come from penetration. I know there are exceptions ofc but it’s low key a trope that we fake orgasams. Also the story is boring.
real
ooh you’s another mlm fetishist
I think they just said that because it’s a common line in yaoi…
Also it’s literally GAY so being surprised and calling them dumb if the author was a male is not it…
THIS IS SO REAL AHHHH I LOB YOY
what...
dude ur just yapping to yap at this point
um excuse me?? but it LITERALLY OKAY for a man to create a yaoi than a WOMAN. Many women (SOME OF THE WOMAN) just reading/making yaoi because of their mlm fetish or whatever it's called. And this is a fiction, you should expect that. Also, you'll never know if there's any gay that can make a straight bottom to come faster.
anyways, I don't mean here that you said that men are not allowed to make yaoi fiction, what I'm talking about here is that the story is gay so you expected gay authors and stop calling them dumb. Because you are taking FICTION too seriously
opx, I mean "gay or man (whatever their pronouns is) author"
wait isn’t op just saying women don’t usually have orgasms from penetrative sex?? how does that make them a mlm fetishist… if anything isn’t it the opposite?? what are yall talking about
You know gay men can be misogynists too, but I should have clarified that I meant was the author a straight man? It’s not beyond the realm of possibility bc with the popularity of Yaoi in the west it’s an easy way to make money for an artist. Also I sometimes find these backwards tropes take me out of a story. Like the way queerness is often sterotyped without any nuance or critique, also takes me out of the story. Or how when rpe happens the rpe victim himself will often say “well I’m not a girl so it’s fine”. Like shting on women and male victims of rape in one sentence. I get it’s silly comics so I try not to take to much to srsly, but sometimes I’m not able to get past it. Especially if it’s a dumb story. It’s like comedy, if Matt Rife had made a joke about domestic violence that was actually funny it wouldn’t have sounded as bad. I like art and don’t want art in any form stifled, but at the same time if your art is bad and you’re talking stupid sht, I’m not going to be as willing to overlook bullsht.
r u dumb LMAOOO they are a WOMAN who continuously consumes MLM CONTENT and expects the authors of MLM CONTENT to be female
WHAT ARE U ON BRO
Hmm it takes like 3 min for me to cum (ofc only the first few orgasms, later on it takes longer) xd on average i cum like 8-10x during sex with my husband.. so what the author said at least fits with me ö.ö (sorry for the private details.. lul) imo guys are just too unskilled :d maybe the playboy friends in this manga were just too good in bed :p
I mean this author is female o.o and its a fact that most yaoi authors are female, theres only a hand full of male authors xd
Agreed. Unless they have a medical condition that prevents them from having an orgasm, it's down to skill issue. And in this case, the top is good so he could make his partner cum fast. Just because OP couldn't orgasm with their partner that easily doesn't make it BS. Calling someone dumb because you can't fathom what's going on certainly proves the opposite.
most mlm content creators are female… let’s not act foolish now
Straight men making yaoi is not a problem considering women do it too. It’s just the fact that you’re calling the author dumb for including one line “you’ll cum faster than a girl” it doesn’t really mean anything it’s a common line in gay smut. Clearly ur the type to want realism in a story but just because a story doesn’t have that doesn’t mean it’s bad. If u want realism then you probably shouldn’t be looking for it in “pink cherry complex”
Booo Non virigin + being bad mother don't have a place in here!
FACTS
doesnt change the fact that they are a mlm fetishist! and when did i ever mention anything ab mlm content creators being male or female? ik most r female, that doesnt change the fact that its weird.
I Hope you know that some girls cum faster, it really depends, and I’m sorry if you’re just so different
Have y’all not read any of the science on women’s sexuality? I already posited that I’m generalizing. But it’s been proven women on average are less likely to have an orgasam from penatrative sex for various reasons including bc there’s very little sex edu, and bc of where the clit is located. But srsly I realized most of y’all have never had actual sex. And why would you make a judgement about my parenting bc I have an opinion you don’t like? Maybe go outside and touch some grass bc you sound like an unhinged freak.
You and the women in those studies just been having sex with lousy partners with terrible skills in bed that's all. Seriously if your entire life, you could only get off from clitoral stimulation where in fact g spot exists and vaginal orgasm is way more explosive, it might be a good time to invest your time in sex education and learn more about yourself instead of making dumb generations.
generalisation*
bruh its yaoi no one cares about logic here