- the pacing is too quick, it's practically a chore to read because the mc is speeding past a lot. The system of stars being integrated, game like screen, tons of different cheat like abilities. I know it's common in this genre but...this is TOO MUCH.... The first 3 chapters alone prove that ....
- the mc isn't the brightest to choose to worry about murdering a guy over the situation of monsters around them...even if this is a moment of fury it's still a poor choice, most people at least have self preservation.(The beginning)
- they gave the mc TOO much power, would have been better if she ONLY had high rank telepathy
- She speaks from a position of privilege and it gives spoiled... I get it, your parent isn't around much and it does things to people mentally but children understand eventually even if it gains some resentment. But she doesn't seem like she grew up unloved or mistreated, she clearly is given allowance, leeway like avoiding school and more.
- ON TOP OF THAT she's an adult so I'm not falling for any extra pity from her being small, she HAS the memories of the other guy who she says turned evil. But did he, or is it her clouded judgement. In his last moments he chose to help her, in the story he apparently helped people awaken, get legendary items and more? If she HAS his memories, why isn't she searching for THE REASON he did everything?
- She chose to immediately start building people for the future after mentioning "should she find the original guy?" AFTER KNOWING he's abused as a child and isn't having a good life. Yes she did good by helping a homeless man BUT ARGUABLY, she is choosing to hold grudges against someone who is currently AN ACTUAL CHILD. Like wouldn't it be better to get someone who would also have the same powers as you ONTO your SIDE? CLEARLY he ALSO awakens young(based on flashbacks to him drawings).
I'm disappointed, if this was a webtoon with a guy mc it wouldnt be marked this highly(we don't get many female protagonist hence the hype).
If you ask why I have an apathy for the mc, I grew up in a poorer situation comparable to the dude and can see how much she has yet is blind to it.
(Also I am a girl who reads the action genre that has all these tropes, as well as the historical female books so I am aware of the flaws to both. It's just im hypercritical)
maybe i am reading a different story but 1. in the first chapter she literally grieves his death and makes a comment on the suffering he put himself through (so no! she doesnt see him as a bad guy & she knows why he did everything he has its just not shown to us readers to build suspense) 2. nobody is going to think clearly or act properly when they are the final survivor (and nobody will be able to come up with the most perfect plan after the trauma & shock she went through probably less than a month ago) 3. we simply dont know enough of the story to be able to judge anything... information is obviously & intentionally being held from the reader 4. it was suggested multiple times that she wants to save the dude n the world (in fact taking his place somewhat but fixing his mistakes) so they dont struggle as much! 5. i got heavily abused & was homeless most of my life yet i can understand why the mc acts the way she does! our struggles shouldn't be a competition or make it so we are void of empathy when she was also a child who wanted to be loved (also its clearly hinted that she struggled a lot more than is shown straight to our face) it's understandable to be hypercritical but i genuinely think you need to reread the story and actually take your time to understand the information being given
maybe i am reading a different story but1. in the first chapter she literally grieves his death and makes a comment on the suffering he put himself through (so no! she doesnt see him as a bad guy & she know... nyarlanya
I understand what you mean in all the points, I think my issue with the story could just be the pacing. If they spend more time integrating parts of the story or building towards it,would perhaps come off better?
I understand her plee and also optimistic lense towards change but there's just something that maybe irks me in this story.
I just cannot exactly put my finger on it currently but perhaps this is something that is to change with time.
Maybe it's that im wishing she was a bit more flawed, more normal and had less? I find it difficult to root for someone who has all of the opportunities, power, money and even status from the jump.
Or maybe this is an issue on the tone of the story? Serious yet has the mc so overpowered that it borderlines comedy since most issues won't be problematic unless if it's something to do with age restrictions.
I do actually find your feedback fun to read and evaluate more. Imma sit on this story for a while see where it goes (▰˘◡˘▰) maybe I'll wait to chapter like 40-ish.
Breathing eating,reading and sleeping I'm not a picky reader, but I am a massive fan of isekai. Like I sacrifice all my free time to isekai and manhwa. I like most genres and will read it if I find it good or bad because that's the way I entertain myself. Oh also im reading and already read are the same list for me. I put things that 100% are done or i really love in the already read. Im reading is just eveything else. So yes i read a lot. The reading list is theonesi deem ok and already read are the ones i really love or are just super unique
So hear me out - I don't think this deserves 9/10
- the pacing is too quick, it's practically a chore to read because the mc is speeding past a lot. The system of stars being integrated, game like screen, tons of different cheat like abilities. I know it's common in this genre but...this is TOO MUCH.... The first 3 chapters alone prove that ....
- the mc isn't the brightest to choose to worry about murdering a guy over the situation of monsters around them...even if this is a moment of fury it's still a poor choice, most people at least have self preservation.(The beginning)
- they gave the mc TOO much power, would have been better if she ONLY had high rank telepathy
- She speaks from a position of privilege and it gives spoiled... I get it, your parent isn't around much and it does things to people mentally but children understand eventually even if it gains some resentment. But she doesn't seem like she grew up unloved or mistreated, she clearly is given allowance, leeway like avoiding school and more.
- ON TOP OF THAT she's an adult so I'm not falling for any extra pity from her being small, she HAS the memories of the other guy who she says turned evil. But did he, or is it her clouded judgement. In his last moments he chose to help her, in the story he apparently helped people awaken, get legendary items and more? If she HAS his memories, why isn't she searching for THE REASON he did everything?
- She chose to immediately start building people for the future after mentioning "should she find the original guy?" AFTER KNOWING he's abused as a child and isn't having a good life. Yes she did good by helping a homeless man BUT ARGUABLY, she is choosing to hold grudges against someone who is currently AN ACTUAL CHILD. Like wouldn't it be better to get someone who would also have the same powers as you ONTO your SIDE? CLEARLY he ALSO awakens young(based on flashbacks to him drawings).
I'm disappointed, if this was a webtoon with a guy mc it wouldnt be marked this highly(we don't get many female protagonist hence the hype).
If you ask why I have an apathy for the mc, I grew up in a poorer situation comparable to the dude and can see how much she has yet is blind to it.
(Also I am a girl who reads the action genre that has all these tropes, as well as the historical female books so I am aware of the flaws to both. It's just im hypercritical)
Anywho sorry for ranting.
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maybe i am reading a different story but
1. in the first chapter she literally grieves his death and makes a comment on the suffering he put himself through (so no! she doesnt see him as a bad guy & she knows why he did everything he has its just not shown to us readers to build suspense)
2. nobody is going to think clearly or act properly when they are the final survivor (and nobody will be able to come up with the most perfect plan after the trauma & shock she went through probably less than a month ago)
3. we simply dont know enough of the story to be able to judge anything... information is obviously & intentionally being held from the reader
4. it was suggested multiple times that she wants to save the dude n the world (in fact taking his place somewhat but fixing his mistakes) so they dont struggle as much!
5. i got heavily abused & was homeless most of my life yet i can understand why the mc acts the way she does! our struggles shouldn't be a competition or make it so we are void of empathy when she was also a child who wanted to be loved (also its clearly hinted that she struggled a lot more than is shown straight to our face)
it's understandable to be hypercritical but i genuinely think you need to reread the story and actually take your time to understand the information being given
I understand what you mean in all the points, I think my issue with the story could just be the pacing. If they spend more time integrating parts of the story or building towards it,would perhaps come off better?
I understand her plee and also optimistic lense towards change but there's just something that maybe irks me in this story.
I just cannot exactly put my finger on it currently but perhaps this is something that is to change with time.
Maybe it's that im wishing she was a bit more flawed, more normal and had less? I find it difficult to root for someone who has all of the opportunities, power, money and even status from the jump.
Or maybe this is an issue on the tone of the story? Serious yet has the mc so overpowered that it borderlines comedy since most issues won't be problematic unless if it's something to do with age restrictions.
I do actually find your feedback fun to read and evaluate more. Imma sit on this story for a while see where it goes (▰˘◡˘▰) maybe I'll wait to chapter like 40-ish.