So hear me out - I don't think this deserves 9/10
- the pacing is too quick, it's practically a chore to read because the mc is speeding past a lot. The system of stars being integrated, game like screen, tons of different cheat like abilities. I know it's common in this genre but...this is TOO MUCH.... The first 3 chapters alone prove that ....
- the mc isn't the brightest to choose to worry about murdering a guy over the situation of monsters around them...even if this is a moment of fury it's still a poor choice, most people at least have self preservation.(The beginning)
- they gave the mc TOO much power, would have been better if she ONLY had high rank telepathy
- She speaks from a position of privilege and it gives spoiled... I get it, your parent isn't around much and it does things to people mentally but children understand eventually even if it gains some resentment. But she doesn't seem like she grew up unloved or mistreated, she clearly is given allowance, leeway like avoiding school and more.
- ON TOP OF THAT she's an adult so I'm not falling for any extra pity from her being small, she HAS the memories of the other guy who she says turned evil. But did he, or is it her clouded judgement. In his last moments he chose to help her, in the story he apparently helped people awaken, get legendary items and more? If she HAS his memories, why isn't she searching for THE REASON he did everything?
- She chose to immediately start building people for the future after mentioning "should she find the original guy?" AFTER KNOWING he's abused as a child and isn't having a good life. Yes she did good by helping a homeless man BUT ARGUABLY, she is choosing to hold grudges against someone who is currently AN ACTUAL CHILD. Like wouldn't it be better to get someone who would also have the same powers as you ONTO your SIDE? CLEARLY he ALSO awakens young(based on flashbacks to him drawings).
I'm disappointed, if this was a webtoon with a guy mc it wouldnt be marked this highly(we don't get many female protagonist hence the hype).
If you ask why I have an apathy for the mc, I grew up in a poorer situation comparable to the dude and can see how much she has yet is blind to it.
(Also I am a girl who reads the action genre that has all these tropes, as well as the historical female books so I am aware of the flaws to both. It's just im hypercritical)
Anywho sorry for ranting.
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I saw the image and got like traumatic flashbacks to when I read the novel.
Like the instant flash of plot just resurfaced (⊙…⊙ )
I CAME RUNNING
CALE MY BOY glad to see your alive and hurting yourself already
The red haired knight walking behind them is literally me whenever I watch couples.
Your going to raise mori? I don't trust you. Hand him over right now. HE NEEDS TO GET HOME
Let MORI OUT. YOU CHILD SELLING, PREDATOR >:(
I hope someone kicks the stuffing out of this guy
I was listening to Scylla and then he died and then started listening to thunder bringer. Unplanned epic the musical songs actually being relevant to plot I was reading
Made reading this 10 times more emotional
If they have kids I need one of them to explain how they met....
How I met your mother style
The way my brain auto filled in the gaps for bad translation bits is funny AF to me. Cause my brain didn't comprehend any mistakes until I saw the blurry note and decided to reread.
This manhwa has an interesting concept though (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Call me crazy but I would have loved a romance story about a orc and elf falling in love naturally through time spent and liking one another with this art style.
That was....fast
They not only confessed but also graduated, got married and joined the tower. Then got positions all in THE SAME CHAPTER
Interesting new king. Seems like a test to see if mo ah is worth helping fight. They are judging her decision making skills to see if this isn't ignorance ヾ(☆▽☆)
Ngl this feels like it will backfire onto him having another person targeting him for love.