The story definitely progressed really fast, but I’m kind of not mad about it. They’re cute so I’ll give the author a pass
The comments are right, the story is VERY rushed. I’d love to see the story like fully develop. The characters have such complex feelings that just aren’t explored and honestly the plot has a rlly good chance of having a yearning arc for the main love interest. Overall, it is rushed, but it also has potential, so maybe a 3/5
As someone that really loves psychological thrillers, this has to be one of the craziest and best couples I’ve ever seen, and everything about the plot is just so yummy. I definitely recommend if you’re into sum freaky shit
IVE PLAYED THESE GAMES BEFORE
You stripped naked in front of another person and propositioned them?!? For shame! *clutching my invisible pearls*
LORD NO the author has written another story where the MC does the exact same thing
Oh...carry on. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
This sex scene has been, so far, THE BEST. Everything is so well illustrated MUAHHH
Okay, but technically, it wasn’t his fault. The cars in front of him crashed, which caused him to crash too. He was in the middle of the track, there’s no way he could’ve avoided that safety even by listening to his team’s advice.
Yeah exactly. Plus, the fact that he didn’t have the proper wheels for rain (he couldn’t change them that very moment either, they had just notified him to go make a pit stop even if he wasn’t planning on doing it later on in the track). I really hope the next chapter has some more character development for him rather than making J.J. Go after him once more, J.J. WAS treated like shit and he deserves a proper apology despite acting out of kindness and responsibility for his job :,)
Next chapter is about to be so yummy