The story definitely progressed really fast, but I’m kind of not mad about it. They’re cute so I’ll give the author a pass
The comments are right, the story is VERY rushed. I’d love to see the story like fully develop. The characters have such complex feelings that just aren’t explored and honestly the plot has a rlly good chance of having a yearning arc for the main love interest. Overall, it is rushed, but it also has potential, so maybe a 3/5
As someone that really loves psychological thrillers, this has to be one of the craziest and best couples I’ve ever seen, and everything about the plot is just so yummy. I definitely recommend if you’re into sum freaky shit
This sex scene has been, so far, THE BEST. Everything is so well illustrated MUAHHH
Okay, but technically, it wasn’t his fault. The cars in front of him crashed, which caused him to crash too. He was in the middle of the track, there’s no way he could’ve avoided that safety even by listening to his team’s advice.
THE SECOND HAND EMBARRASSMENT I would literally fall and collapse, kill myself right then and there
I don’t feel bad for this alpha fucker at all. As soon as the Omega said, “I have a son” I knew it was gonna be the alpha’s lover. I hate cheaters I’m dropping this.
I'm so confused and I have no idea what the plot is anymore but as long as Toma is here I'm staying
I hate when they always ask “were you in such a hurry” with that cocky little smirk. Like bro you took his wife?! OFC HE’S GOING TO BE IN A HURRY?????
I’m going to kill myself if this MC doesn’t realize he’s pregnant quickly. Like girl that’s your whole job. Don’t tell me it’s gonna take you five chapters to fully acknowledge it.
Yk what? I knew this is gonna happen, but I’m still a bit surprised and disappointed. I was really hoping this man would become a green flag & at least care A LITTLE.
Yk what? I hope Dan does rat out J. Bitch had it coming

















