beta
Lol, I saw in the comments where people are feeling pity for Callis, against their will so others advised them to re-read the first few chapters and that’d take care of that! I had no pity problems, but I couldn’t believe all that crap happened that early on so I thought I’d check it out. I just finished chapters 1-5. I hate Callis even more. Unfortunately, now that I’ve started to re-read it I can’t stop. It’s even better the second time around.