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I feel like the story's great but it needs more. Misunderstandings there for the ml coz he thought mc's with him because he feel sorry for him. And ml was okay with it, well... I'm not. I wsnt their relationship to be strong, like reslly strong. Some doesn't want a climax but I badly need it. For me to feel at ease that they truly really love each other, without what ifs or I want him to be as miserable as me. I want ML to understand that mc loves him very much and I also love for him to be healed from his trauma of the past.
I want a happy ending
It eventually will go there. It wouldn't be a good story without all of those obstacles in life. That's what makes the story great cus of how realistic it seems. Life isn't as simple as sunshine and rainbows but that doesn't mean they can't get their own happy endings. They just need to get through this, I feel like if they do, they will be able to grow as people and be able to finally heal themselves. Trauma is all about facing your fears and overcoming it. When they do, their relationship will become stronger in the process :)
Yeah, and that's exactly what I wanted them to experience. That's why I feel like it is lacking in some ways. I know life is hard and I can clearly see it in their story and mine as well anyway, that's more the reason why I want them to have a happy ending. I want them to be in a situation where they can clearly convey their love for each other. And yeah, by "climax" I meant obstacles. You know those kinds of situation that wil make their feelings more intense? I like to see that. Anyway, I love how the story goes and I can clearly see it's not the end yet. And yeah, trauma is all about facing your fears and that's exactly what I want the ml to experience with the help of mc :)
How!!! How could they stop it there The cliffhanger man! That was smoking hot. I never ever thought the mighty Jaehyuk would eat his ass like it was his last meal but damn! Way to go Jaehyuk! Andd, I kinda doubt it would be 'just'the tip though. Once you enter, you can never go back. It will be a home run!
Damn, Yaoi has ruined my innocence. I like it.