I feel like the story's great but it needs more. Misunderstandings there for the ml coz he thought mc's with him because he feel sorry for him. And ml was okay with it, well... I'm not. I wsnt their relationship to be strong, like reslly strong. Some doesn't want a climax but I badly need it. For me to feel at ease that they truly really love each other, without what ifs or I want him to be as miserable as me. I want ML to understand that mc loves him very much and I also love for him to be healed from his trauma of the past.
I want a happy ending
It eventually will go there. It wouldn't be a good story without all of those obstacles in life. That's what makes the story great cus of how realistic it seems. Life isn't as simple as sunshine and rainbows but that doesn't mean they can't get their own happy endings. They just need to get through this, I feel like if they do, they will be able to grow as people and be able to finally heal themselves. Trauma is all about facing your fears and overcoming it. When they do, their relationship will become stronger in the process :)
Yeah, and that's exactly what I wanted them to experience. That's why I feel like it is lacking in some ways. I know life is hard and I can clearly see it in their story and mine as well anyway, that's more the reason why I want them to have a happy ending. I want them to be in a situation where they can clearly convey their love for each other. And yeah, by "climax" I meant obstacles. You know those kinds of situation that wil make their feelings more intense? I like to see that. Anyway, I love how the story goes and I can clearly see it's not the end yet. And yeah, trauma is all about facing your fears and that's exactly what I want the ml to experience with the help of mc :)
Love the artstyle! Love the story! Dang both the main characters are so handsome it says they're siblings but they are not related at all so it's fine. I do have a bad feeling about older brother's circumstances though, the thing where he sucks blood? What if he is some kind of varian or something. He even ate an animal carcass which is mentioned to have a variant dna. Ahh so curious. It's very interesting.
I really hate authors who puts second male leads in painful situatioms. Actually, I hate a story with second male lead at all. Because it is painful seeing then give their best and hoping they'll be picked by the fl only to get hurt. And when they're hurt, it hurts too. They didn't do anything so why nust their story be painful. Just give them a girl who will love them as they are or make then realized sooner that they will only get hurt further if they continue their feelings. Please.
Ohh but what about stories like "The Tyrant Wants To Live Honestly"?
Where the 2nd ML of the past life is now the main ML of the current life. And the main ML of the past life who took FL for granted, is now the second ML.
So it kinda makes the audience glad that the new 2nd ML is hurting because of what he did to FL in the first life.
My moon owl!! I've been rooting for since the very first time you introduced yourself to her! I was conflicted wether you are the ml, and then he is always there everytime with this special effect around him that nade him feel like my ml, I was confused whether he was just simply a part of the show or what but OH MY GHAD I CAN FEEL IT! I think he's the boy our fl like even. A lot of hints were given. But maybe that's just me hoping. But dang! Sucks for platinum really, the moment he see someone acting like marriane he suddenly changed his path. Nah uh. Both are fake but I still feel sorry for our fl. Now he must be feeling very regretful and guilty because of what he did. IDC MY MOON OWL IS ONE OF THE JEWEL! AAAGGHHHH I LOVE TO SEE THEIR INTERACTIONS!!!
How!!! How could they stop it there The cliffhanger man! That was smoking hot. I never ever thought the mighty Jaehyuk would eat his ass like it was his last meal but damn! Way to go Jaehyuk! Andd, I kinda doubt it would be 'just'the tip though. Once you enter, you can never go back. It will be a home run!
Damn, Yaoi has ruined my innocence. I like it.