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Omg i hate it. Unpopular opinion i guess but the story was so bad. It was not realistic at all. I'm gonna section all of my issues with this webtoon.
Firstly, about the otaku and the bully couple, I get that the otaku forgave the bully but wasn't it too fast? Like they need some time to restore trust but nooo lets act like all the bullying was nothing and fuck each other. Oh and why? Cuz love. No thats just bs like I dont know about u but I fucking hate that.
Secondly, im not saying they have to end up together but the way we never ever talked about that former president and brown haired dude is just frustrating. Again I'm not saying they have to end up together but at least give us some confrontation. Like what happened after? Ugh
Next, I dont think even u guys can walk past that archer and blonde dudes story. LIKE WHAT. He didn't even confront him about it? Why are they even a couple? I think we can all agree that blonde dude is a shallow asshole. And yes he's an asshole not for rejecting him when he was fat but for rejecting him by saying some mean shit. Like they're meant to break up. "I cheated on him cuz I wanted him to be jealous" are u fucking kidding me? Sorry but I can't feel the love there.
Next, About our main couple everything was good until the whole fire drama happened. First hes saying some dumb shit to his lovers face then he can't even say hes his boyfriend. Ugly mf doesn't even confront him about any of this. I get it its trauma but ugly mf didn't knew what was happening. But he was still not mad but more worried. Like is he a saint? Just unrealistic. But those stupid stuff are not even the issue here. THAT UGLY MF WAS GETTING RAPED AND HE LITERALLY LEFT HIM THERE AND WOULDN'T HAVE TURNED BACK IF SOMEONE DIDNT SAID "even tho he might not like u anymore and cheat on u, u should still chase him cuz u love him." (WHICH IS JUST THE WRONG MESSENGE DONT CHASE SOMEONE WHO CHEATED ONU U) LIKE WTF why would he tell u he wants to break up when u guys just 1 day ago talked about loving eachother? And I would be ok with the whole letter thing if it came from that ugly mf(btw thats just what I call him)phone but nooo it was literally from some girl THAT HE DIDNT KNOW BUT HE DIDNT EVEN SECOND GUESS IT LIKE HE WAS SO SURE IT WAS UGLY MF. Doesn't that just show that he doesn't trust him? And then he goes to some warehouse where there isnt ant furniture, looks shady af, ugly mfs hands are TIED HES CRYING AND HE SHOUTS HIS NAME LIKE HE WANTS HELP AND THAT PINK HAIRED DUMB BITCH JUST RUNS AWAY? AND THEN THEY DONT DO ANYTHING ABOUT THE WHOLE RAPE SITUATION? LIKE EVERYONES JUST FINE WITH IT? IM PRETTY SURE UGLY MF FELT BETRAYED WHEN HE SAW HIM JUST RUN OUT. AND HE NEVER TALKED TO HIM ABOUT IT. DO U THINK POWER OF LOVE SOLVES EVERYTHING AUTHOR? Ughhh that whole thing was so badly and unrealisticly written. Im sure there's some stuff I'm even missing but this is all that comes into my mind rn. So yea I hate it I think it was shit. Oh and im not gonna say anything about that rapist guy cuz he has a sidestory and i actually liked it. As for the side couples it just feels like author made everyone gay added some spice and completely forgot about every single one of them. I know this was long but if u agree and want to add more things or u disagree and want to debate about it pls reply. But yea I hate it bad writing unlikable and annoying characters just meaningless caos. Overall I give this a 3.8/10 （￣へ￣）
i agree on the otaku and bully couple but thats it
I hated this story too. I cried tears of frustration and I literally screamed as loud as I could everything was just written like if it was rushed
Bro frrrr nobody even cared he got r*p3d. Like wtf? And they essentially ended it by blaming him for 'cheating' and like he was totally ok with that sunbae??!! They were hardcore victim blaming. NOBODY EVEN APOLOGIZED! WTF! then they glosses over it like it never happened? Jaerim is literally abused, bullied, r*p3d, and assaulted through the whole story and nobody even consoles him??? WTH? That's a huge problem and the author acts like it's not. He could have ptsd, anxiety, depression and other things cuz of it. He was even being recorded to make things worse and Yuri still did nothing regarding it. It was like, "well Yuri is depressed so no one's pain matters other than him" That's my biggest problem with the story. I agree it was decent until the whole fire drama. I actually liked it before then :/
OMYGAWD LITERALLY EVERYTHING YOU JUST WROTE IS SO EFFING TRUE LIKE the author really said “oh yeah his parents dies so his pain is worse” like okay yes it sad but what about our poor boy Jaerim he suffered through THE WHOLE DAMNED STORY
OMG YESSS IM SO GLAD SOMEONE ELSE IS ON THE SAME WAVELENGTH AS ME
OMG YESS FINALLY SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS LIKE SO MANY PEOPLE DID MANY SHITTY THINGS TO HIM AND HE NEVER GOT ANY APOLOGY OR ANYTHING. THEY DIDNT EVEN WENT TO POLICE. AND THE WORST PART IS HE WAS LIKE "nah this didn't effected me at all" LIKE WHAT. THATS JUST BAD WRITING. AND in the rapist guys story he does get an apology but nothing serious it was like "yea sorry I tried to rape u can you forgive me already now" and then he didnt even flinched or showed and signs of trauma or anything in that matter he was completely fine and unbothered. Like how, just HOW can people ignore all of this plothole and be like "awwww they're soooo cute"
RIGHT!!!!! WTH?! LIKE THEY REALLY ACT LIKE ITS NOT A BIG DEAL WHEN IN FACT ITS A HUGEEEE DEAL. I HATE HOW PPL ARE IGNORING KNOWING THAT HAPPENED! THEY'RE DOWN PLAYING THE SEVERITY AND ROMANTICIZING IT!
Thanks for the heads up bc I'm not gonna waste my time reading this
Im really tired of authors doing this shit. Rape is a serious subject. Its not fine. That seme and everyone involved should go to jail. But instead, nobody gets any punishment and mc gets together with his rapist. Everyone who's trying to normalize or justify rape in this comment section is disgusting. Ughh I'm tired of yaoi. Like seriously, in yaoi we never talk enough about sexual assault, rape or harassment. This is an issue and its really tiring because nobody even complains about it. Look at these comments, some people are saying "I love it" they are not affected with the whole rape story at all. They are like meh yea rape is bad but whatever. This is not normal. I stopped reading shoujo cuz it was unrealistic but at least there's something called consent there. I think I'm gonna take a break from yaoi. Feel free to recommend me some yaoi with good story please.
Wholesome bl list
https://www.mangago.me/home/mangalist/915361/
Caring gentle semes list
https://www.mangago.me/home/mangalist/915325/
It’s fiction. Honestly, get a fucking grip you sad cunt. Crying over yaoi
Im not crying over it im simply stating my hate for rape. Its not like I'm mad because my ship didn't happen im literally talking about rape here. I know its fiction, but you do realize story's can still make you feel stuff? Thats why people read them? You obviously don't have the mental capacity to understand emotions or deepness a story has. You probably only read it for smut. Ahh, that's sad honestly.
Once again, crying about fiction. People can feel things about a story, but enough to write a full essay crying about it? Also, you do know it’s omegaverse right? The seme was a victim the same as the uke, according to the story. Cry more you moron
Ugh.. I get that you cant understand whats written but can you at least try? Like I said, I'm bothered with the whole rape part and as you can clearly understand from what I wrote, not only for this story but generally for yaoi. And I honestly don't get why you're acting like a toxic little 3 year old. Why are you trying to make me look weird for writing an essay about it? There's nothing wrong with it. Like if I wanna talk about a subject yes im gonna write a whole paragraph and thats not weird or bad, thats just normal. Do you never read reviews lol? And why do you even care so much? Like what you're trying isn't working maam. "Cry more you moron" ok keep saying stuff like that cuz you can't find a good argument good job dw I get it a lot of people cant handle it
dont bother lol they r projecting, the one with a small brain here is definitely them i understand you just fine