I'm sorry, but I don't understand why it has such a high rating.
I read the whole story. In my opinion, it's an empty story, just sex, the uke is bossy and the seme is useless. I've never read about such a useless seme who contributed absolutely nothing to the story. Read at your own risk :)
Cause it started out good. Then went downhill in the middle. I rated this highly at first as well and then the top just became so useless and the plot melodramatic for no reason. I like dominant bottoms and they're so rare to find, it's disappointing that this ended up the way it did. I think the couple suffered from a severe power imbalance, common sense from the top and contrived miscommunications.
I can't anymore. This thing is breaking me. So sad, so painful, my heart is bleeding I'll let this one marinate for a while, again! I hope that when I come back, they are together again. (=・ω・=)
This story is beautiful. Possibly i will read it again in the future to smile with happiness
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It was good at the beginning......
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But at the end it was just meh :/
I had high expectations when the villain appeared, but everything went into a tailspin from there .... :(
Yeah, the time skip after time travel and the sudden HE w/o seeing the resolution of the villain makes it so mid.. if we had atleast gotten to see him finish off the red wolf pack, we'd have some satisfaction.. also I wanted to see that red wolf friend he had at work who had a human fiancee and her child have a HE too.. and I wished they could be friends..
OMG El Malévolo Cucarachón se nos puso sentimental
Quiero verle la cara de pendejo cuando se de cuenta que lo ama y le tiene que rogar como perro jja
I feel like these last few chapters were kinda rushed, like after they go in their ways, years passed and later she meet up with Yura and baam, everything is like the past, we love each other and start to date!!! Like no, those things doesn't happen like that, I know it's a fictional story, but when you meet someone who was your lover and something like the story happened it takes a while before the waters calm down, so that's why i feel it rushed, but that was just me being a picky reader (^○^) I still liked the story even though it moved and ended that way, the sex scenes were kinda hot (///∇///)
But I was thinking about... that family is a mess, just imagine the little girl growing up and later discovers that her mother sleep with her uncle hahahahah that will be crazy
I was thinking about the clothes, but another thought came to my mind: how come she doesn't get pregnant after the King did that thing?? You know what I mean
Starved, stressed, no periods for a long time... Not sure what the signs are.
It says the first time they have sex that Ishakan’s people have to do special rituals to have children so the semen itself isn’t enough
Well.. it's fiction (≧∀≦)
Convenient
in real life u would be also shocked how difficult some girls get preg. i myself am trying for 2 years :( from the hirst day we did it without a condom i thought i was gonna be preg, but it depends very much on the period of the month, to be the fertility days and the level of stres.
thats why in historical stories u see in arranged marriages that they have a certain day scheduled for intimacy, cuz thats the most fertile day for the wife.
I started the story long before the art went to shit, but I let it sit. I picked it up again, but seeing the changes and how the story was becoming meh, I continued it so I could finish it.
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So many plot holes, no variety in the outfits, and don't tell me it's an office story. I've read plenty of those, and you can tell they put effort into the clothes and the characters' appearance. It's not even worth rereading. I was practically desperate to finish it because I don't like leaving stories unfinished. Not recommended.