HOW did y'all get passed chapter 1, who the FUCK grinds on someone for picking up their damn phone I don't care if this is the most moving, spiciest BL ever I'm not reading it just one chapter make me so mad maybe I'm overly sensitive but I can't do it
I got passed it bc 1. That guy isn’t the ML, 2. He got some pretty good justice via ML and I’m assuming even more to come, and 3. They’re genuinely fucking hot and have a good relationship and I actually really like their personalities too, like they’re growing on me and I’m excited to see more on both sides since we’ve just started exploring our beautiful top, and I’m already in love with our bottom
author trying to make it seem like grayson is smart and a badass but there's literally no physics that could explain how grayson could hide a whole fucking backpack after getting kidnapped by dane who would have searched him for weapons at the least?? did he quite literally pull the backpack out of his ass??? I refuse to believe dane didn't search him or spot the damn backpack hanging out his ass apparently
girl you can't be using your full brain while reading yaoi. you gotta use half.
plus the parachute would have been in the helicopter (they must have multiple parachute for saftey reasons just like having life jackets on a boat) so grayson had him distracted with heigth phonbia act and asked him to get water. so when dane turned his back to get water, grayson put on the parachute and it makes sense dane would not have noticed in a panic yhinking grayson wanted to jump to his death out of fear
And u also seem to be forgetting it's a Helicopter the sound of the blades rotating makes anyone feel deaf during that time and next thing there is a lot of air pressure from outside so ofc the eyes are blinded and what do u see when someone is actually trying to fall down from a chopper their face or if they are wearing a Parachute bruh u don't know how brain works also
ok but what competent kidnapper would leave a direct route out of the kidnapping 5 feet away from the hostage? dane being competent is a part of his characterization, so this just took me out of the story like if 2 plus 2 is 4. I'm not expecting a mona lisa of a chapter but more time going into the planning would have been nice
Lmao please say that in kiss me if you can also when fans rushed into for Chase and their craze for Chase okay and chase throwing a person out of a helicopter it also doesn't make sense cause I have never seen fans rush like that like crazy people so please use logic there too okay. And also Dane is not someone who has been kidnapping from a long time and also it's mentioned in the novel how convincing Grayson was about it and that's y dane turned his head literally if someone is going to die maybe due to the fear of heights would u be worried about them or be like will they escape and also Grayson was tied in his hands so ofc Dane feels it's okay lmao I can't spoon feed u info and Grayson broke it off and got it do u think Grayson is dumb lmao? Bruh has been always on the verge of getting kidnapped by people and was trained by Ashley on how to escape so stop with it useless common sense
That's actually pretty valid. Since multiple novel chapters were being compressed into one manhwa chapter the storytelling can be a little too straightforward. I love this scene in the novel though. Dane was actually super cautious that Grayson was lying but then he started convulsing and genuinely looks physically ill so he gave in. If ur interested do check the novel out~
because no matter how much you love the person, for omega's being bonded is truly a way to force them into not acting with free will. bonds have always been so icky to me because choosing to stay with someone is real love, not anything that forces you to stay. I DON'T CARE HOW LOVEY DOVEY OR GREEN THE RELATIONSHIP IS. I die on this hill.











the author can milk this for all it is honestly, like this BL was the blueprint of how to do childhood friends to lovers RIGHT back in my day. like and Haebom was adopted into their family but it was never made weird and even with this crazy plot out of nowhere it STILL clears all the stepbro BL's in it's sleep.