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Critic October 22, 2020 7:00 pm

they literally got out and instead of opening the door they moved the bins and locked themselves back in again like w h a t

Critic October 19, 2019 12:58 am

guyls so determined to be a martyr which is beginning to get annoying. If you push someone away so much, they'll eventually listen and leave

Critic August 21, 2019 2:23 am

why are they making it seem like a battle? Like, "daddy loved me less than you so there you privileged only somewhat neglected and abused asshole. Come back when you get the next tier of daddy issues, nerd."

their dad sucked. but he also dead af courtesy of our mc, so I'm trying to parse out this grudge.

Critic August 15, 2019 1:59 pm

okay tbh the art never slapped me that hard, I like it but I there are other art styles that click with me more, y'know?

That said, what business, does Kassan have being that fucking beautiful the whole chapter. I went back to like 8 different pages 50 different times because homeboy literally was in a coma for a three year glow up

How the fuck? Who allowed him?? I'm just blown away. Anyway, I have to go reread the chapter and get punched upside the skull by all the pretty again.

    Lexi August 15, 2019 3:20 pm

    Lmao I meant to downvote, because I think the art is amazing (which is why I hope the other works get updated)

Critic August 1, 2019 6:30 pm

Me, immediately catching on: he gon' get his booty ate

    d_8709 August 1, 2019 7:44 pm

    that hasn't happened yet??

    Critic August 2, 2019 7:31 pm
    that hasn't happened yet?? d_8709

    I feel like it has but with all the context clues dropped before Yohan asked I'm guessing not

Critic July 18, 2019 10:26 pm

how is Kansan literally princess peach
he gets kidnapped every three seconds and then doesn't even fight

like this time is less aggravating because he was drunk but at what point will he find and utilize a spine??

    afroluv July 18, 2019 11:13 pm

    Well someone is always poisoning him I guess but isn't this the first time he was kidnapped since his family was killed off? In my bae's defense he DID pull a knife out on his big bro AND way back when he stabbed Igen...that alone took some big hairy brass balls. Also he refused to cry out when he was being beaten back in his early slave days, that's kinda manly. Also, remember he stole that knife from that pervert and cut his old ass even after he was drugged to be submissive you know, after his bro sold him to be a sex slave.
    This time he was knocked out drunk and lord knows why he didn't have more guards when Igen wasn't there to protect him himself.

Critic July 5, 2019 4:27 pm

the author literally took a good character and made him a creepy manipulative piece of shit
which would have been interesting if it was a slow thing but he literally just snapped out of nowhere
it happened so fast I had to go back and check to make sure Alan was actually sane at some point

also MC is legit just like, "yeah he's crazy, we been knew" even though it's never been acknowledged until now?? I could've used the warning if this was apparently just common knowledge. And even as common knowledge, why is MC super down with crazy?

"We date for two days (after I creep into your room and literally assault you) and now you should leave the country with me????" Shouldn't the response to that be a restraining order instead of a proposal?

Omg and don't even get me started on the random ass demon

I think I'm done with this author, way too many blindsides lmao

    Quenkani July 5, 2019 5:47 pm

    Yea, first story started off nicely, but the ending was rushed and without much sense. Second story seems okay now, plot isn't going too fast, but I'm afraid it will around the end.
    For now, I like the second story better, but if the author rushes it again, I think I'm gonna give up.

    Sachiko July 6, 2019 5:15 am

    Um so you think that a book that can reveal the past, understand the present and predict the future while conveniently landing itself in the appropriate person's hands all on it's own is far more believable? Okay, then..... And where was this flippant reply about how 'Daniel's' response should have been to apply for a restraining order when other readers were calling him 'stupid' because he didn't immediately jump into 'Alan's' arms despite the book placing him in danger whenever Daniel went against the book's/his own wishes? Because 'Alan' did demonstrate just how manipulative he could be all throughout those chapters. Although I'm not surprised people who victim blame missed it, so......

    Critic July 9, 2019 12:53 am
    Um so you think that a book that can reveal the past, understand the present and predict the future while conveniently landing itself in the appropriate person's hands all on it's own is far more believable? Ok... Sachiko

    lmao first off, calm down wow, the salt in the comment could give someone high blood pressure

    the magical book is literally the plot point the entire story is based on. It's fantasy. That has nothing to do with characters making unrealistic decisions and/or just completely changing in general.

    In general, I'm confused how you got to victim blaming at all, but I also don't care so I'll ignore that one. Uh... he did immediately jump into Alan's arms though?? Like legit went and immediately bought a ring which is literally what I referenced, did you read the whole thing? (And what do you mean by "And where was this flippant reply about how 'Daniel's' response should have been..." that's literally my comment, not something that was said in the story. Like I am the one who said that. The where is the comment you are mad at.) Also why would I care what other readers thought when forming my own opinion?

    Alan had manipulative moments, yeah, but nothing like the rushed end of the story lmao he literally goes off the deep end, why should I ignore that? Or is "I'm gonna take this book bc it's kinda shitty and obviously why I can't get my buddy to love me," the same as, "I'm gonna sneak into his room and sex him up while he's sleeping and also half-blackmail him but call it a promise" to you???

    I'm so confused by your comment how exactly did you get this heated when it doesn't seem like you read most of my comment?

Critic May 12, 2019 8:10 pm

also them: gets out NINE FUCKING BOTTLES

alright go on with your livers of steel

Critic April 15, 2019 2:56 am

here comes the obligatory, "it's not you, it's just that I care about you so much we absolutely cannot be together," conflict

It's never fails to aggravate me when characters dump people "for their own good," I'd love for this story to skip that. Or just handle it differently.

Tbh, since a few other common tropes have been avoided in this manhwa, I'm really hoping Sebastian has a backbone and tells Greg to go fuck himself

Critic April 9, 2019 9:17 pm

dump his ass goddamn
until he gets his shit together and stops treating Chiba like shit

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