beta
Unpopular opinion but this one is still enjoyable, although the chasing arc was indeed lacking.
The premise and the smut were just too good. The writing was also great for the most part, except for the last few chapters. I loved the evolution of their intimacy, it's perfectly illustrated by how Yoongun was kind of a germophobe, but gradually got more comfortable and made exceptions, and so they went from handjob to sex, to fellatio, to rimming iirc.
It was a pity that the ending was so rushed so I waited eagerly for the side stories and now they're finally coming. May we get a more satisfying ending with this!
The bottom was drunk, so unable to consent, and he did say no. It was straight up rape.
The bottom cried again after and said that it hurt, and the top's response was to rape him again, but this time he would make up for it by making him "feel good".
I feel like this had some potential, but those scenes left a bad taste in my mouth.