beta
i need dietrich to drop his poor me act and stop being a pussy it's getting old. i get that this is just the beginning of his character development but he's so average as a main character that im reading this solely because of charlotte. not even their relationship, just charlotte. every development to the story AND the characters (even dietrich's character development excluding the last chapter) happens either because of her or through her and dietrich is just not as interesting. get it together and start being bolder dude, you're getting repetitive.