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Lotegra December 11, 2023 11:55 pm

One year in an man has no character development

    cheshi December 12, 2023 2:36 am

    hate that this is true

    Priscilla December 12, 2023 6:20 am

    ig its fine for characters to be slow burns with the development, but for them to still be unlikeable is CRAZY.

Lotegra November 20, 2023 8:11 pm

Okay can someone tell me where to find rest of it???

Lotegra October 12, 2023 10:36 pm

This was actually fun to read, funny af , and cute

Lotegra October 11, 2023 11:47 pm

Ah this had so much potential, another poly relationship waisted very sed

Lotegra October 11, 2023 3:20 am

Okay but... like... uke was super cute and i love him all my heart , and he is so sweet and he deserves world, but...... and big bat.... seme on the other hand i thought would be more caring towards him after that incident, yes he loves him and so on but maaan come on all this and he still is like we are nor couple? Bro wtf , it seems like he was only sorry for his shity as behaviour once uks wasn't around , but once he's with uke nothing changes he still treats uke same at final chap as he did at the begining.....and aside from seme there are soooo much plot holes , and don't come at me with it's only 20 chap , there are tons and tons of manga with only 5 chap and no plot holes , if you feel like you can't fit story in short then don't make unnecessary world building, even the vilian arc was for nothing
Like what did we get from that? That seme realized he loves uke ? Bro no he was still being his old self after the incident , we got nothing from it....

But i do like the story as the idea and i love uke fully i think autor could choose better way to express him , for example we see that uke has crisis with his identity , we could explore that it would be more emotionaly interesting when whole vilian arc . Alsoooo art wasssss sooooo friking good

Back to seme he was giving such a mixed signal alll the time , he was like no you can't suck me off amd then he was like - let me put it in, bro like make up your mind. I feel like it's autors foult and not semes .

And one more about vilian , again plot hole , at first we see that he wasn't to gat a wish and he dose literally everything for it . But then it's like he only wants uke for him because he "loves" him in his own twisted way, but like if it was the case from the beginning why would he "sale" out uke for others , why would he allow other to tuch "his butterfly" . Like two totally different motives wich makes up totally different chrecters and once they are switched , it makes plothole. I think he could've been great vilian but meh .....
Love the uks tho

    Shnnn November 19, 2023 8:36 am

    cuz thats more like him and its actually more realistic that way. What do u expect? a sudden change of behaviour like a whole different person then it wouldn't make sense.

    Lotegra November 20, 2023 7:33 pm
    cuz thats more like him and its actually more realistic that way. What do u expect? a sudden change of behaviour like a whole different person then it wouldn't make sense. Shnnn

    I literally said what i wanted and acknowledging the relationship status and not playing dumb isn't sudden change Also from the start till the end he had all the time to change, it's called development and growth , i guess you never heard of that , or that incidents like that not slightly but drastically if not fully changes people that's what realistic but i guess we are not here for common sense . And if you want realistic in that manga nothing was realistic so at least they could made it like i wanted . And as a story it needs start point and then development of the story and characters and culmination . If we don't get it that means story was flat as fuck and didn't accomplished even basics . So thanks for your concern about my comment hope you'll learn little bit more love you kiss you fuck you

Lotegra October 5, 2023 9:10 pm

Okay should i be worried like 15-30 ???? Im just starting to read it

    nunyabusiness October 14, 2023 6:52 am

    threw me off too but u should still read it it’s pretty good and they don’t get involved until the mc is way older lmfaoo like 9 years past

Lotegra October 2, 2023 10:34 pm

Omg this is so stupid bahaha , i couldn't stop laughing , it's like autor remembered stuff on the way and write it as they go , it started out as silly one but got worse on the way . It really feelt like i read 14 years old girl writing watpad and trying to be deep and dark but doesn't knows how bahahaha i really waisted my time so stupid

Lotegra October 2, 2023 9:01 pm

I loved frist one because, top also got what he deserved and out uke wasn't right away in his arms after what he did , even tho tops explanation is understandable it doesn't makes it right , he got scared so he hurt someone he loves? I don't understand how can you do that to your loved one , meke them question their reality and leave them alone, and then years later act like you did nothing wrong ! So ya i loved that uke didn't agree to him right away , i love them and i hope they will work though it

Lotegra September 28, 2023 11:57 pm

So ,, i think even tho they ended up together , it feels to awkward like I can't imagen they being im a relationship at least for now , even tho they like eachother it's fact that they don't know how to be comfortable . Also i cryed for Mc idk i just love him so much ,yes he was selfish as fuk and manipulative, but he was kid and he grow out of it , how black haired treated him after becoming roommates was totally deserved, but once he confessed and it wasn't taken seriously it made me cry , i think at that time black haired one was total asshole and mc didn't deserved that kind of cold-hearted act , there are some plotholes and so on , but yaaA i love MC

Lotegra September 25, 2023 10:27 pm

Ahhh I want to see them having progress , it's like they are amberesed to act as they feel , it stings my heart whenever blonde one is sed because they end up in same spot , arguing and all

    Lotegra September 25, 2023 10:28 pm

    Also i really love this is literally enemies to lovers , and they didn't resolved everything after one chap , i like that trop was going

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