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So all the MLs kinda suck? They all seem slightly defective when the FL looks like a potato next to the king’s lover, and they were meant to fall in love with him anyway. The count/duke also feels really weird when you consider he basically thinks of the FL as a “souvenir” from his first love. It’s really hard to find someone to root for. Also the plot feels frustrating, like nothing is really happening? Or should I say it’s sort of aimless? I get that the FL is just trying to survive, but that’s not really a direction for the plot to go. Just some thoughts, Y’all.