why my comment keep disappearing is there words banned here?
ooh i think i found out. You can't mention other sites. My comment didn't disappeared when i censored b*to
I tried to read it. A lot of times i don't trust comments bc i ended up liking the stories but this time meh... i stopped at chapter 10. I like when bottom have at least a bit of personality or something about themselves. There's 40 chapters and they're already sleeping together. I'm not gonna keep reading but i already see it coming.
The bottom is gonna go to the army and even with all the time apart as soon he come back a nd the top make a move they will be sleeping together.
Idk the story and art isn't extraordinary and i need something to make me want to stay when the story is cliché. I'm not hating but there's nothing that make want to keep reading.
First of all the story is absolutely shit and the bottom spends all his time running away from top for no reason they don't sleep together till after chap 30 but it's meaningless the bottom just cums and then it's over then he trys running away again the next day the bottom annoys me the most he's in love with the top but puts no effort into the relationship and the top is the one putting in all the effort honestly don't waste your time
thank you so much now i'm sure i don't want to give it another chance
it's back yaaay now time to wait for months for more chapters to release before reading again lol
The art is good but the story isn't great honestly. If you want a quick story with smutt well idk if i would recommend it? honestly the smutt isn't the best in my opinion. It wasn't that interresting. I rec if you want a short story and not think. But if the author worked the story better it would have been good bc i see the potential.
I like stories, toxic or not, where you feel the love between the character but their love? It go too fast. Like it start with the smutt, then flasback, of hey hey knew each other before, BAM smutt with no build up, oh hey you thought he hated him bc of the first smutt scene? No actually he always loved him since young??? The bottom knew that but he ended up forgetting him ??? Oh smutt and they start dating. Honnestly if feel like a story that you start to have in you head and you explain the main points to your friend but instead to working it out you start to write it right away and that's it.
i was gonna post my review and i found out there's a novel??? maybe the novel is better ??? idk maybe i'll read it one day if it's translated and hopefully the story is better and the pacing is better
Sorry for all the grammar mistake i just noticed them... I still make mistakes when i write bc english isn't my first language
This is the most HONEST review that I have ever seen in the comments. All they talk about is the artstyle but this one is an exception.
thank you so much for updating!! it wasn't confusing at all
the way i usually notice detail but i had to see the comments to realize there were twins
There's nothing i actually hate but idk i don't like the top. Is it his looks? his personality? idk i just don't like him
Lowkey like I don’t love him I’m just whatever but I love the bottom he’s too cute
His facial expressions are odd..can’t emotionally connect with him
it's probably that yeah
same i love the bottom
Sometimes it's nice to read story when it's not 100% about romance
right?? it's better when the romance are subtle or like only the build up tension haha
Was there a change of artist? I'm asking bc i knows it can happen and because the art got worse but mostly for the bottom. The top is still always hot but it's not really a much bother bc the story is so good so you don't really think about it and it took me time to realize it personally.